2018/5/14 14:42:00
怎樣提高雅思寫(xiě)作成績(jī),了解一下
雅思寫(xiě)作不同于其他的英文寫(xiě)作,究竟怎樣才能取得雅思高分呢?
一、開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)
“良好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半”,有個(gè)良好的雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭段也是相同的道理,寫(xiě)好了開(kāi)頭段離雅思寫(xiě)作高分也就更近一步了。那么我們?cè)撊绾螌?xiě)好開(kāi)頭段?下面給出幾個(gè)寫(xiě)好雅思作文開(kāi)頭的幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單方法,各位烤鴨們可以參考參考~教大家如何做到在第一段給出清晰的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)!
其實(shí)我們可以把雅思寫(xiě)作題目中的提問(wèn)方式分成四個(gè)大類(lèi):觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)(opinion essay)、討論類(lèi)(discussion essay)、優(yōu)劣勢(shì)類(lèi)(advantage and disadvantage essay)和報(bào)告類(lèi)(report)。每一種提問(wèn)方式的題目都有自己不同的開(kāi)頭段寫(xiě)作方法。
Opinion Essay
觀察觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)題目的特征,我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn),此類(lèi)題型的特征是題目有且只有一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。而題目要求我們回答的是 "同意" 或 "不同意" 的觀點(diǎn)。所以只要確定好自己的觀點(diǎn),開(kāi)頭段就可以寫(xiě)出來(lái)。
例如:Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health.
Do you agree or disagree?
如果,我們選擇同意此觀點(diǎn),可以根據(jù) "背景句+直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目+個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)" 的公式。
These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. (直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目 ) Personally, I agree with this idea. (個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))
如果選擇不同意題目觀點(diǎn),則可以用 "although" 的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句進(jìn)行改寫(xiě),得到:
These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) Although some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health, ( although + 直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目 ) personally, I do not agree with this idea. (個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))
Discussion Essay
觀察討論類(lèi)的題目,可以發(fā)現(xiàn),這樣的題目會(huì)有兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn),并且題目要求 "討論雙方觀點(diǎn)" 和 "給出自己的觀點(diǎn)"。這樣的題目中,其實(shí)只用在開(kāi)頭段中寫(xiě)出背景句和轉(zhuǎn)述雙方觀點(diǎn)就好了,至于個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn),可以放到 personal idea 的段落中。如:
Some people think citizens should be responsible for their own health costs. Others think it is better to have a healthcare system which provides free health services.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
這個(gè)題目的開(kāi)頭段就可以寫(xiě)為:
People in some countries are paying an increasing amount of money for seeing a doctor, even for a minor illness. (背景句) But, still, some people assert that individuals themselves are supposed to pay such fees. (一方觀點(diǎn)) However, other people disagree and suggest that it is the government’s responsibility to undertake the health costs for its citizens. (另一方觀點(diǎn))
Advantages & Disadvantage Essay
優(yōu)劣勢(shì)的題目,一般而言都會(huì)給出一個(gè)現(xiàn)象或者是趨勢(shì),這又剛好和我們開(kāi)頭段中的 "背景句" 吻合了,所以在優(yōu)劣勢(shì)文章的開(kāi)頭段的時(shí)候就沒(méi)有必要再寫(xiě)背景句了,直接轉(zhuǎn)述題目就可以了。但是要表達(dá)出自己的 "優(yōu)大于劣" 或者 "劣大于優(yōu)" 的觀點(diǎn),只需要用一句話就搞定了。如:
Shopping online is replacing shopping in stores.
Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
開(kāi)頭段可以寫(xiě)為:
These days, it is common to see that people prefer choosing online shopping to shopping in physical stores. Although some problems would occur as this trend continues, I believe such development brings more benefits.
Report
其實(shí) report 最簡(jiǎn)單,因?yàn)橥ǔn}目和優(yōu)劣勢(shì)文章一樣,會(huì)給出一個(gè)現(xiàn)象或趨勢(shì),所以開(kāi)頭段的組成部分就只有改寫(xiě)題目。如:
In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes.
Why is this happening?
What are the possible solutions to solve this problem?
These days, it is common to see that the rate of youth crime has been increasing dramatically all over the globe and it is one of the most worrying issues in modern society.
二、句型擴(kuò)展
對(duì)于語(yǔ)法基礎(chǔ)薄弱卻沒(méi)有時(shí)間系統(tǒng)學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)法的同學(xué),建議先熟悉英語(yǔ)句子的框架,只要不離開(kāi)這些基本句型,句子就不會(huì)有錯(cuò)誤,然后在基本句型的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展。比如:
1. 有一個(gè)大的增長(zhǎng);
There was a substantial increase.
2. 有一個(gè)大的增長(zhǎng)在汽車(chē)數(shù)量上;
There was a substantial increase in the number of cars.
3. 有一個(gè)大的增長(zhǎng)在使用清潔能源的汽車(chē)數(shù)量上